: As a web novel with over 16 million words, the pacing is a frequent point of critique. Many reviewers note that the first book feels like a "messy first draft" in need of a heavy-handed editor, with chapters that frequently "wander" and "dawdle" through slice-of-life moments.
Based on community feedback and expert reviews, the wandering
“It’s a wandering series in need of an editor. Well written and acted but the pacing is weird and story arcs aren’t arced well, IMO.” www.facebook.com · 1 year ago : As a web novel with over 16
: The "Innverse" is exceptionally vast, often described as having an "ocean-deep" complexity that rewards long-term readers. It features unique takes on classic fantasy races, such as Goblins who are treated as more than just "vermin" through thoughtful allegories on survival and racism. Well written and acted but the pacing is
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