"There is a bit too much plot summary here; try to focus more on your own analysis."
Focus on reinforcing what they did well while giving clear directions for improvement. "This is a very well-thought-out argument!" "You express your ideas so well in this section." "I love how you’ve used vivid language choices here." Constructive Critique: Recommended Comments
Structure your feedback into major and minor comments to help the author prioritize revisions. "There is a bit too much plot summary
"Moving forward, think about how this point connects back to your main argument." Recommended Comments